https://youtu.be/4UuWKj2_ltc
The feedback I was getting from my last pitch was to shorten it up and I tried but I couldn't get everything in and cut the time, but I have become more comfortable in front of the camera and more comfortable about my pitch in general.
It's good to hear that you felt more comfortable in front of the camera. I think that this is difficult to do because I always feel nervous in front of the camera. However, with these elevator pitch assignments, I feel that I have improved a little. Hope we all can do better next time!
ReplyDeleteI also feel that I've become more comfortable in front of the camera, I can hear a difference in your voice this time also! You seem better rehearsed and more aware of your idea. It's awesome to see everyone improve through these videos. The idea was well put and I believe done in a timely manner. I'm excited to see what is to come next. Well done.
ReplyDeleteHey Kailey I have noticed the difference between this one and the other ones, you sound more confident and secure of yourself. It is definitely better and you should keep it going that way so it gets better and better with time.
ReplyDeletePretty much agree with everyone - you seem more confident. You did a good job of describing your product in the first minute, and I think you could probably cut out/condense the other minute or so of the video. Details aren't too important for elevator pitches once the main idea is across. If the product is presented well, people will look up the details. If it isn't, they probably won't stay around for the extra minute.
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